支招小作文(228) I 動態表 三年中收入和消費變化

May 29, 2025

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The table below shows the income and expenditure of Harckley Hall, a public place for hiring over the period of three years.

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Body 1:Total Income,Expenditure,Profit

Body 2:四種收入來源

開頭段

The table illustrates changes in the revenue and expenses of Harckley Hall (an employment center) over a 3-year period.

概述段

It is clear thatroom-hiring consistentlyaccounted for the largest shareof revenue.Whiletotal incomeunderwent an upward trend, total expendituredropped with a more significant rate,resulting ina decrease in overall profit over the period.

思路要點:

- income of hiring room數值一直最高

- total income上升,但expenditure下降幅度更大,profit呈現下降趨勢

Body paragraph 1

On the whole, total incomeincreasedfrom £83,500 in Year 1 toa peak of£85,000 in Year 2,before falling back to£84,000 in the last year. The total expenditure,however,saw a continuous risefrom £56,000 to £62,000 over the 3 years,narrowing the gap with the total income.As a consequence, the overall profitfell considerablyfrom £27,500 to £22,000.

思路要點:Total Income,Expenditure,Profit

- Total Income:第一年爲£83,500→隨後第二年達到峰值£85,000→第三年小幅度下降到£84,000

- Expenditure:第一年£56,000→持續上升,第三年達到£62,000,與total income差距縮小

- Profit:從£27,500顯著下降到 £22,000

Body paragraph 2

Regarding specific revenue sources, we can find thatroom-rental incomeincreased slightlyfrom £34,000 to £35,000 during the first two years,before droppingremarkably to£32,000 in Year 3.Conversely,there was a modest decline inincome from running the Café, falling from £3,500 in Year 1 to £3,000 in Year 2,followed by a noticeable increaseof £1,000 in Year 3.As for funding, the local council donated £22,000 annually for the initial 2 years,after whichthis figuredipped marginallyto £21,000 in the subsequent year.In comparison, funding from other sourcessteadily increasedfrom £24,000 to £27,000 over the 3 years.

思路要點:四種收入來源

- 兩種income方式數值呈現相反趨勢

- Income of Hiring Room:第一年爲£34,000→小幅度上升第二年達到£35,000→顯著下降第三年達到£32,000

- Income of Cafe:第一年爲£3,500→小幅度下降第二年達到£3,000→第三年顯著上升了£1,000

- funding from local council:前兩年平穩在 £22,000→第三年小幅度下降到 £21,000

- funding from other sources:第一年£24,000→持續上升,第三年達到£27,000

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