支招小作文(215) I 動態柱圖 英國四個博物館人數變化

February 13, 2025

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The graph below shows the number of visitors to four different museums in the UK from June to October in 2015.

分段方法：

Body 1：History Museum(藍色)、British Museum(橙色)

Body 2：National Museum(黃色)、Science Museum(綠色)

開頭段

The bar chart illustrates changes in visitor numbers to four museums in the UK over the period from June to October 2015.

概述段

Overall, August wasthe peak seasonfor visitors,withthe most significant disparity in visitor numbers observed among the four museums.Additionally, Science Museumwas much less favoredcompared tothe other three museums during the given period.

思路要點：

- 八月遊客數量整體最高，且四種博物館的遊客數量差異最大

- Science Museum整體遊客數量較低

Body paragraph 1

Obviously, British Museum and History Museumexhibited dramatic changes in their popularity.Specifically, the former attracted 200,000 people from June to July,half of the figure forHistory Museumduring the same period.Subsequently, the formermore than tripled toa peak of700,000 in August,after which this figure plunged toonly 180,000 by October.Similarly, the number of visitors to History Museumgrew significantly to600,000 in August.Aftera noticeable fall tothe initial figure in September,there was a marginal climbby 8,000 in October.

思路要點：History Museum(橙色)、British Museum(藍色）

- British Museum、History Museum變化顯著

- 橙色在六月數據爲200,000，是橙色的一半

- 隨後，橙色：八月上漲三倍多到峰值700,000→十月急劇下降到180,000

- 藍色：在八月顯著上升到600,000→九月回到最初數值→十月小幅度上升了8,000

Body paragraph 2

However, such drastic changes were not observed inthe other two museums.Aftera slight decline to380,000 in the first three months, the figure for people visiting National Museumincreased remarkably to500,000 in September,before dropping sharplyto 300,000 in October.Likewise, the Science Museum, which attracted 400,000 visitors during the initial three months,experienced a steep decrease tojust 200,000 in September,followed by a modest growth to300,000 in the final month.

思路要點：National Museum(黃色)、Science Museum(綠色)

- National Museum和Science Museum變化幅度較小

- 黃色：六月~八月小幅下降到380,000→九月顯著上升到500,000→十月急劇下降到300,000

- 綠色：六月~八月數據爲400,000→九月急劇下降到200,000→十月小幅度上升到300,000

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