支招小作文(221) I 動態表 五個國家稅收對比

April 3, 2025

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The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected (as % of GDP) in five

countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.

主體段分段方法:按照 <變化幅度> 分段

Body 1:Sweden、USA(幅度較小)

Body 2:Korea,Japan,Turkey(幅度較大)

開頭段

The table compares tax revenues(recorded as a percentage of GDP) across five nations in four different years: 1975, 1985, 1995 and 2005.

概述段

Overall, all the five countrieshad witnessed an increase intheir tax revenue, with Swedenconsistently having the highest figuresamong them.The most drastic increasein tax collection was observed in Japan.

思路要點:

- 五個國家數值都上升

- Sweden數值始終最高

- Japan數值變化最顯著

Body paragraph 1

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatSwedentopped the list in terms oftax revenue throughout the years,with the figure rising significantlyfrom 46% in 1975 to 70.1% in 2005.In contrast, the tax revenue in USAremained relatively stable,increasing only slightlyfrom 25.1% to 27.4%during the same period.

思路要點:Sweden,USA

- Sweden:數值始終最高,1975年46%→顯著上升,2005年達到70.1%

- USA:數值相對平穩,從25.1%小幅度上升到27.4%

Body paragraph 2

The other three countries experienced more noticeable growthin tax share. Japan,in particular,sawits tax collectionmore than doublefrom 15.1% in 1975 to 32% in 2005. Korea's tax-to-GDP ratioalsostarted at 15.1% in 1975, after which this figureexperienced a modest rise with a period of fluctuationsto 27.3% in 2005.Meanwhile, the tax revenue in Turkey initiallydropped slightly to15% in 1985,but it thensaw a dramatic riseto 27.4% by 2005,matching the USA's tax ratio.

思路要點2:Japan,Korea,Turkey

- 其餘三個國家數據變化顯著

- Japan:變化最大,1975年15.1%→上漲了兩倍多,2005年達到32%

- Korea:1975年爲15.1%→隨後小幅度上升伴隨波動,2005年達到27.3%

- Turkey:1985年小幅度下降到15%→隨後急劇上升,2005年達到27.4%,等同於同年USA數值

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