支招小作文(213) I 動態變遷地圖 學生宿舍樓變化

January 16, 2025

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The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building.

分段方法：一圖一段

Body 1：2010年

Body 2：Now

開頭段

The maps compare the layout of a student accommodation building as it was in 2010 and today.

概述段

Overall, this buildinghas undergone significant changes, primarily involving the addition of more student bedrooms to accommodate a larger student population.Additionally, a large car parkhas been introduced, along with other new facilities.

思路要點：

- 新建更多student-bedroom以容納更多學生

- 新建一個car parking

Body paragraph 1

In 2010, students could enter this residence hall through the main entranceat the southwestern corner.Upon entry, they would walk down a hallway with a dormitoryon the left,adjacent toa bathroom.On the right-hand side, a narrow garden stretched along the length of the hallway.Continuing straight ahead, students could reach another bedroomat the far end of the building.Turning left, a kitchenstood next tothe dormitory,followedby a third bedroomin the northeastern cornerof the hall.At the western endof the building, there was a smaller garden and a living room.

思路要點：2010年

- main entrance位於西南角

- 進入之後是hallway，所有邊是一個student-bedroom，和一個bathroom相鄰

- 右手邊是一個長條狀的garden

- 正衝着hallway盡頭是另一個student-bedroom，與一個kitchen相鄰→隔壁是另一個student-bedroom，西邊是一個小規模的garden和一個living room

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, several significant changes have been made to the current layout.Whilethere have been no changes tothe main entrance, the hallway hasbeen shortened to create space fora newly built en-suite room,which is located to the left oftheoriginaldormitory in the southeastern corner.Similarly, the previous gardenon the southern sidehas been replaced bya spacious car park. The two bedroomson the eastern sideof the buildinghave remained unchanged,butthe kitchenhas been expanded toserve as both a cooking area and a communal social space for students.On the northern side, twoadditionalstudent bedroomshave been added,replacingtheformergarden and living room.

思路要點：Now

- entrance沒有變化，但hallway被縮短，在東南角的student-bedroom左邊新建一個en-suite room

- 南邊的garden改建成一個car parking

- 東邊的兩組student-bedroom沒有變化，但kitchen增加了social interaction的功能

- 北邊的garden和living room被改建成另外兩個student-bedroom

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